Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Marae evaluation

3D rooms

WALT: Create 3D spaces and objects using our knowledge of 2D Shapes.

I think I did well shading in the same spots so it looks like the sun is coming in from one side.
Next time I need to fill in all the white gaps to make it look realistic.


One day Beorn was having a nice nap when he heard a familiar voice it was salad the super dog calling for help. He sprinted out of his wooden door and found salad the super dog suffering in a plastic bag
He heaved the plastic bag off salad. Salad was very happy. Beorn went for a stroll in town to see if anyone else needed help, when he bumped into Charlotte. Charlotte was the owner of salad the super she was very happy. Three days later she was the most famous ever living animal everrrrrrr!!!

Tuesday, 24 March 2015

Oral Picture

I think I did well on making it sound like a real story.
Next time I need to draw the pictures better because lots of people didn't understand how the story went.


This is some maths I have been working on. My goal is to complete the patterns with fractions and decimals

Thursday, 12 March 2015

Writing Criteria

Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.
WALT: Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.
Draw them.  
Introduce your character in an entertaining way.
Describe their looks.  
Describe their personality.  
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can
Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
  • use a range of verbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
  • select one or two similes
  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds
  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment
Feedback: I love the way you told me his feeling I felt like it was real.

Feedforward: Next time you could introduce him more.
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

Bearon no human he is no fluffy animal he is a skin changer.

His nose puffs out like a blown up hot air ballon. His coat keeps him warm every single day of the winter. His six claws are as sharp as a knife extra sharpened. His fangs glow in the midnight.

Though Bearon might have extremely sharp claws he is the most soft hearted person you have probably ever heard of.

He keeps you warm at night if your lost, He gives you training lessons to defend yourself from the dark side.

I would hate to be on the dark because he would knock you out in the tick of a clock.

Welcome to my Blog

Here is my welcome to my blog video. Hope you enjoy.

WALT Inform (entertaining and persuading our audience to visit our blog)

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds

I think I did well on showing what I like.

What I need to work on next time is to put some learning things in it.