Monday, 7 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

Description: This term for writing we have been writing to persuade. We have been persuading about headphones. My brand name is Zone Out! I hope my writing makes you want to by these incredible headphones! So here is my writing....
Feedback/Feedforward: I like the the way you put lots of exclamation marks to make your writing sound persuasive. Next time you could tell where Zone out is and if you can order online because then you could get more buys

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